Ronny 1,061 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 (edited) And like the the "Poet" these poems disappeared Nowhere to be seen No more to be shared. Edited February 11, 2015 by Ronny 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidCore89 7,402 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 Some nice material here mate. I read and hear lyrics and rhymes on a daily basis from MC's who specialize in a similar kind of thing but with the lyrics being laid down live over a DJ set. That's basically what I just did here, I went over all of this but at a much higher tempo than expected from a poem (175-180 beats per minute). The first 32 bars of number 2 are pretty cool, if it lasted a full 64 bars instead of 48 bars then it would have some wicked flow. I don't know how familiar you are with bars at each given tempo, but a 64 bar rhyme will always roll off the tongue much better, it won't sound as though anything is missing from the end and it can easily be recited to any basic beat (not that you require music or a beat, but that is always a good way to check the flow of your rhymes). Nice work. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 To be honest you talk over my head here but it would be really cool to hear it with the beat you talk about Things like this is just for fun, things I do when I'm bored or got nothing else to do, these are usually rimes that comes to my head within minutes and probably not spent to much thought to But I'm glad you enjoyed it Thanks mate 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 (edited) Damn You DC! Now I'm starting to think Rap / Poem here Ok I'll take your post as a challenge It's Not as easy when it's not just popping up in my crazy imagination, bur here we go.... Moved to top! Edited August 18, 2014 by RO9M 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 *Matusware Approves This Topic* i think we have a talent in our crew, only thing we need now is somebody who knows how to make music and..*snaps his fingers* presto!..we have ourselfs a band.. yeah!.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vishesh_91 509 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 I've been watching a few Rap Batlles recently on Youtube,any suggestions? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninemillerkiller 15 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 It's 6 am on a Saturday morning.. I am still up and slightly drunk. But your beer poems could never get old for me. Keep it up buddy, your poems are awesome! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted August 16, 2014 Author Share Posted August 16, 2014 Thanks Mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juve 192 Posted August 16, 2014 Share Posted August 16, 2014 XDBX jingle lyrics.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted August 19, 2014 Share Posted August 19, 2014 Matusware the Mad (character related) long time ago when world was differend without shadow without blight i was a man. fire in my heart and i served the light but thus light broke my heart and my mind was corrupted by bitterness i turned my back to the light and embraced the darkness i consumed the madness, the insanity and the anger hate. strong as stone inside me. burning like cancer tattoos on my skin tells the tale long forgotten facepaint keeps my trueself well hidden in silent moments, in moment of sanity im thinking, im hoping, can i reclaim my humanity? but i cannot, i will not, my soul is lost in the dark sea and there is nothing that can set me free but members should not fear me no dont be fools im bound by crews official rules dont be alarmed. no need to hide im a teamplayer. im on the same side but if you cherish you life very much my saber you will never touch no matter if you touch it once or two i will release you from the future and bury you 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted August 19, 2014 Author Share Posted August 19, 2014 That was Great reading Matus 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted August 20, 2014 Share Posted August 20, 2014 That was Great reading Matus *Bows* Thank You Sir Ro9m Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 8, 2014 Author Share Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) What Matters Moved to Top! Edited September 20, 2014 by RO9M 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 that was good one *claps* 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 8, 2014 Author Share Posted September 8, 2014 Thank you Sir Matus of Crazywill. *Bows gracefully while receiving clapping* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted September 8, 2014 Share Posted September 8, 2014 *sings* Why does it feel like night today?Something in here's not right today.Why am I so uptight today?insanity is all I got leftI don't know what stressed me firstOr how the pressure was fedBut I know just what it feels likeTo have a madness in the back of my headLike a monster that I hold insideA monster that awakes when I close my eyesA monster that watches every time I lieA monster that laughs every time I fall 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 11, 2014 Author Share Posted September 11, 2014 (edited) A special Day Moved to Top! Edited September 20, 2014 by RO9M 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted September 11, 2014 Share Posted September 11, 2014 *Claps*...*gives angry look* thats not tear ion my eye!... *Matusware Approves This Post* (approves rommies last poem that is) 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssracingn2 935 Posted September 11, 2014 Share Posted September 11, 2014 Absolutely beautiful Ronny. 1 Quote http://www.gta-stats.com/player/image/medium_1.units_0.platI_1.plat_2/custom.stats_races_ratio.stats_dm_ratio.crime_kills_players_headshots.crime_kdr_players.other_vehicles_speed/ssracingn2.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 11, 2014 Author Share Posted September 11, 2014 Thanks Guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted September 11, 2014 Share Posted September 11, 2014 Matusware - Highway to Paleto Bay (AC/DC - Highway To Hell) Living Easy, Nothing Is Free Bus ticket on a one-way ride Asking Nothing, Leave my Saber Be puting everything in my trunk theres no reason, this dont even rhyme Ain`t nothing I`d rather do going down, Hammer Time My Mates Are Gonna Be There Too, Yeah! I'm on the highway to Paleto Bayon the highway to Paleto Bayhighway to Paleto BayI'm on the highway to Paleto Bay No more fusilade`s, speed limit5 stars not gonna slow me downLike a wheel, gonna spin itmugger's not gonna mess me roundHey Mors, payed my duesPlaying in a awesome crewHey Hatched, look at meIm on my way to the promised land I'm on the highway to Paleto Bayon the highway to Paleto Bayhighway to Paleto BayI'm on the highway to Paleto Bay 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 12, 2014 Author Share Posted September 12, 2014 (edited) Matusware - Highway to Paleto Bay (AC/DC - Highway To Hell) Edited September 12, 2014 by RO9M Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 16, 2014 Author Share Posted September 16, 2014 Something to think about Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronny 1,061 Posted September 20, 2014 Author Share Posted September 20, 2014 (edited) Moved To OP. Edited December 21, 2014 by Ronny 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matusware 608 Posted September 24, 2014 Share Posted September 24, 2014 Matusware - Biscuits (IMAGINE DRAGONS - Demons)When the days are coldAnd Shark cards are foldAnd the paintjobs we seeAre all made of goldWhen your Races all failAnd the ones we hailAre the worst of allAnd the piswasher’s run staleyou wanna hide em from meyou wanna shelter em but i seewith the madness insideThere’s nowhere you can hideNo matter where they arecant hide em in your cari smell sugary delighti smell sugary delightWhen you feel my breathLook into my eyesI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hideDon’t get too closeIt’s Madness insideI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hidebefore grenadeballI have eaten them allWhen the lights fade outi steal more from paulSo you dug them on groundthere must be atleast 1 poundbut i have showelat least give me a towel*diging sound*Don't wanna let you downBut I am hell Houndi can smell biscuits all over youDon't hide the truthNo matter where they arecant hide em in your cari smell sugary delighti smell sugary delightWhen you feel my breathLook into my eyesI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hideDon’t get too closeIt’s Madness insideI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hideother say it's what you makehiding em from me but its my fateto eat em from bowlill steal em and go*runing sound*When you feel my breathLook into my eyesI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hideDon’t get too closeIt’s Madness insideI know where biscuits hideI know where biscuits hide 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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